Reimagining School Writing
Move beyond the five-paragraph essay. Bring school writing to life through freewriting, peer reviews, and allowing students to include relevant memories and vivid descriptions.
There is a sad truth about the way that most students learn to write: They become boring writers. To write with clarity and insight involves struggle (regardless of age). When faced with this challenge, many students are taught to detach from content, to analyze with sterile language, and to develop ideas within a narrow formula.
Structure is helpful, but if not implemented strategically, it can stifle creativity and require students to go through motions rather than investing themselves in creating something. Many of our attempts to help young people develop writing skills actually deter them from the joy and power of developing a unique, insightful writing voice.
New Ways of Understanding the Writing Process
Others (such as Nancy Flanagan, Elizabeth Rorschasch [PDF], and Ray Salazar) have thoughtfully written about some of the problems with the widely-used five-paragraph essay. Peter Elbow, author of Writing Without Teachers, explains that a problem may not be solely restrictive formats, but also the organization of the process:
How can we honor this process and make school writing about discovery? Instead of leading students to feel that school writing must be separate from their lived realities, how can writing allow students to find meaning through a process of creating?
At Science Leadership Academy in Philadelphia, where I teach, we adopted common language to help us unify our writing instruction. Throughout the four years of high school, we emphasize thesis statements and the crafting of arguments. While I believe there is much value to this approach, I've also come to believe that we should do more to help young people develop their writing craft.
In the book Occasions for Writing, Robert DiYanni and Pat C. Hoy II offer a vision of essay writing which provides a more open structure that I find liberating. They frame essay writing as "mak[ing] something new, something that only you can create," (2) and they encourage writers to go beyond the idea of a thesis: "Rather than simply declaring a thesis in your writing -- something that you intend to 'prove' -- you should be actively inquiring about and developing an idea" (6). This type of essay writing allows writers to use images, experiences, and text as evidence that leads to discovery. By blurring the line of what is acceptable for an academic paper, we allow students to experiment and be creative. Because they become more engaged, they become better writers. And because they are better writers, they are better able to adapt as writing expectations shift within different contexts.
My Experiment: Advanced Essays
This year, I've given it a try. My 11th grade students have been writing what I chose to call Advanced Essays. (Here's one Advanced Essay project description.) Each one has come at the end of an inquiry unit where we read multiple texts that investigate a theme. Themes are broad and have included topics such as Literacy; Identity and Belonging; and Violence, Militarism, and Alternatives. We begin our inquiries together as a class, reading, writing informally, and discussing. Then I provide students with a collection of resources beyond what we have covered together and also encourage them to research on their own as they work to "develop a larger idea." (I’m using the words "thesis" and "argument" much less.) With the goal of allowing writing and ideas to evolve and develop, we've done many writing exercises that lead to the final product, including:
- Descriptive writing about artwork or images (see Diyanni and Hoy)
- Writing scenes of memory relating to the theme
- Freewriting exercises
- Reading sample essays
- Reflecting on earlier writing assignments
- Creating annotated bibliographies
- Submitting drafts
- Peer reviewing drafts
Most of these steps are graded for completion in the hope that students are not penalized for taking risks and struggling with large ideas. I want students to see these steps as part of the process of discovery and creation of a polished final product.
Much of the writing that my students produced this year is different. While some chose to stick with what they know (the format of traditional academic essays), others found ways to use their lives and their city as evidence while developing ideas that can be profound and moving. The result is writing that means something in the world, writing that has the potential to engage any reader, inside or outside of a classroom setting. The students have been posting their work to public blogs and proudly sharing their papers with peers. A more traditional format would not have encouraged Anastasia to write about the illusion of color-blindness, Jun-Jie to write about immigrant struggles, Alex to write about sheltered schools, or Imani to write about social media and the new sense of identity. (See more examples in my post Student Voices on Identity and Belonging.)
As it turns out, this experiment with writing instruction helped me develop an idea of my own: How we ask students to write affects their understandings of learning and creation. Let's do what we can to bring more meaning to the work of school by letting students explore ideas, express themselves, and write in organic, innovative, and public ways.