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When I was a student, nothing helped me become more skilled at writing history than learning about journalism -- news reporting, in particular. I don't mean to undervalue my fabulous teachers in high school or college, many of whom spurred my intellectual growth and curiosity. Still, learning about reporting played a pivotal role in my success as a history major at one of America's most revered academic institutions, Brandeis University in Waltham, Massachusetts. Each year, then, I teach my high school history students some news-reporting basics. You might consider doing the same.

Teaching About Concision and Clarity

The best student history essays are concise and clear. Read any front-page New York Times article, and you'll notice concise, punchy prose that gets straight to the point. Take Wednesday's terrific business story by reporter Binyamin Appelbaum, "Citing Growth, Fed Again Cuts Monthly Bond Purchases.”

WASHINGTON -- The Federal Reserve announced Wednesday another $10 billion cut in its monthly bond purchases, in a statement that attributed the decision to "growing underlying strength in the broader economy."

The "lede graf" (journalism slang for "opening paragraph") is chock full of juicy information. Better still, Appelbaum avoids needless words, especially long or obscure ones. We know what Appelbaum is reporting on, and what he will examine closely.

Last week, my sophomores put their European history books aside to study news writing. Most of them came away with a better understanding of how and why they should write more like Appelbaum -- more concisely and clearly.

To assess their learning, I assigned a fake news lead. "The search for Savannah Mash, 17, continues after authorities uncovered evidence of the teen's possessions in the bushes of a Garden City, Miami residence," one student wrote. After sharing her work in class, she told me me how this activity "helped make learning to write easier and more enjoyable."

Teaching About Fairness and Objectivity

Quality historical writing also requires dispassionate, objective analysis. For many students (and experts), this is difficult to achieve -- all the more so when dealing with tragic events. Even as a graduate student in history, I found it difficult to remain neutral when writing my master's thesis, The Historian's Craft: Comparative Uses of Genocide Survival Accounts.

I certainly don't mean to argue that we should teach high school history students to write without emotion, or silence anybody's unique voice. But we must teach students to balance objectivity and compassion -- and, once again, great news writing serves as a terrific example.

Next week, I plan to have my students read an April 14, 1994 New York Times article by Donatella Lorch, "Anarchy Rules Rwanda's Capital and Drunken Soldiers Roam City." The lede and "nut graf" (journalism slang for "second paragraph," usually of a feature news story, that provides additional and necessary context) strike that balance. Lorch crafts a respectful and responsible narrative of the early days of a genocide which would claim upward of one million lives.

KIGALI, Rwanda, April 13 -- Food had run out, drinking water was scarce and the streets of this capital city, empty of residents, was a terrifying obstacle course today of drunken soldiers and marauding gangs of looters dressed in a patchwork of uniforms, armed with machetes, spears, bows and arrows and automatic weapons.
Children carried hand grenades, and open-back trucks, loaded with angry men waving weapons at passing cars, sped through the city. As night fell, screams could be heard coming from a church compound where more than 2,000 Rwandans had taken refuge. A short time later, after the sound of machine-gun fire, the screaming stopped.

At the end of the year, I want my students to leave my classroom better able to write like Lorch, whose storytelling approach captures the reader's heart and mind. For an upcoming writing assignment, in fact, I'm having my students rely on Lorch's piece as a launching pad to cover a topic of their choosing -- so long as it has something to do with European history, with sufficient primary source material to inform their analysis.

Teaching About Sources and Fairness

History teachers often tell students to make effective use of sources, and -- surprise, surprise -- news articles reinforce that point. Furthermore, the best stories quote sparingly and briefly, another lesson history students would do well to learn.

Few things are more upsetting to a history teacher than to have to ask a student, "How about some analysis with those quotes?" In a news story, when a source is quoted, it's necessary to provide balance and unique insight. Accordingly, I might ask a student, "Can you write a summary that does justice to this quote in Lorch's story?"

"And the tragedy is that I don't know whether anyone will be able to stop it," said Philippe Gaillard, the head of the International Red Cross here. "When you negotiate with people with machetes, how can you make them understand about humanitarian neutrality?"

Have you also found educational uses for news writing in your history classes? Please share your thoughts and experiences in the comments section below.

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Daniel Kuczynski's picture

Thanks for an informative post David - I have used similar strategies in trying to teach writing to my junior high history students. I have found that a"lead" that grabs the attention of the audience be it for writing or lecture, works well. And I often remind my students of the KISS principle - Keep it short and simple!

Lisa's picture

This is very important as we shift our way of teaching. Students, as well as every human, have access to knowledge/information at the touch of a button. Therefore, the teacher is no longer the keeper and deliverer of information, but the facilitator of thinking through the information. Asking students to evaluate sources and write to those sources is crucial for guiding them toward mastery of life, college and career success. Thanks for the post!
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Elvinah Obuya
Learning support teacher from Arusha Tanzania

I have enjoyed reading your post David; it is true that as teachers we need to get what will work for our learners and use it to maximize learning our classes. In your case it was history and it has worked well with your learners. Pupils also find learning meaningful if it is linked to real life events. Knowing that the skills they learn can help them become great journalists can motivate them and keep them on the right track

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Liz Sadler McEntire
7/8 Grade Special Education Teacher

Dave, your post was an excellent reminder of how the lessons we are teaching our students should be cross - curricular. I co-teach with a fellow special ed teacher, combining history and language arts and I have been inspired, or challenged as the case may be - to create our history report on Montana as a newspaper - using primary sources. I think this could be more engaging for the students. I cannot wait to pro[pose this to my colleague tomorrow!

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TBR Maria
Publisher of The Bunk Room, a magazine written entirely by kids.

Well said, David!
Kids greatly benefit from learning these basic tools of the journalistic trade. At The Bunk Room, we encourage kids to follow their passions and step out of their comfort zone to interview others and retell the story for our readers. Being both in print and online provides kids a relevant place to share their story, rather than stuffing the story away in a notebook.

These journalistic skills also sweetly transfer to so many areas of writing and stand as firm foundation for clear communication.

We invite your kids to share their writing with us!

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