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Music educator and professional development trainer based in Hampshire, UK.

Beautiful concept, Jeffrey.

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I really like Jeffrey's concept of 'Music Writing' on many levels. Some thoughts:
1. This is motivational. We all seek self-knowledge, and the search becomes an obsession during the teenage years. What differentiates us from one another is our unique set of feelings and emotions. Music is the emotional essence of an experience crystallised in tone. The most emotive of the art forms, music has a unique role in eliciting self-knowledge. Somteimes, music is clearer and more personal than the abstract nature of words.
2. The exploration of students'internal world has been relegated to a secondary importance with today's prominent school focus being science and math. These subjects are important for our learning of the external and physical world around us, but contribute zero to the internal and subjective. For example -as Einstein said -what has math to say about first love? Jeffrey's considered writing concept addresses a real need. Furthermore, Jeffrey-as-teacher acts as a conduit, enabling students to share and discuss the personal. Intrapersonal leads to interpersonal. Essential opportunities for self-expression, and the students learn to write at the same time(!)
3. I love to see teachers 'have a go' at different ideas with their classes. Someone said 'if we always do what we've always done, we always get what we've always got'. I'm sure Jeff was unsure what the outcome would be from his new idea. He tried the 'counting' exercise and then -in de Bono style - considered improving an idea that already worked pretty well. As a model for continuous improvement, this is great.
4. This has all the hallmarks of what great education is alll about, and nothing was mentioned about measurement. Why? Because when kids are truly intrinsically motivated, measurement matters less. The teacher can then 'lose' time in the activity. As Rousseau said - good lessons lose track of time -don't try to save it. How do you 'test' the ensuing discussion and personal insights? As Einstein said: not everything that counts can be counted (and not eberything that can be counted, counts).

Thanks Jeffrey, I hope your ideas continue to challenge.
Michael Griffin
www.musiceducationworld.com

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Hi S. English,

Thanks a lot for your kind comment. I think in our rush to raise our kids' test scores, we forget about the oft-used phrase, "kids come first," which, sadly, translates to "kids come last." Let's not forget about the inner and outer lives of the students, so they will discover who they are and make the vital connections between their school lessons and life experiences.

Best regards,

Jeffrey Pflaum

This was a great article. It

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his was a great article. It is great how you brought the student's life into the lessons and their experiences. This is so important as students will make a greater connection.

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Hi Renee,

I'm re-writing my response because I want to make sure you receive my comment. My apologies for the second round.

The Contemplation Writing Project has been around since the Seventies and was extremely successful. After the kids completed a year's worth of contemplations (approximately 120), this "internal education" was imprinted in their minds and imaginations, and they could take it with them throughout their lives both in and out of school. Witness one of my ex-students, Marisol, who commented on the piece and how my organic form of writing helped her and her classmates. With Music Writing, the students taught me more than I taught them; it was truly a learning experience on both ends, and it will work in your school as well. The post is only the tip of the iceberg about Music Writing.

With kind regards,

Jeffrey Pflaum

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Hi Marisol,

It was so WON-DER-FUL to hear from you, since I thought I had lost you after we connected recently. Thanks for your comment and description of how Music Writing helped you and the kids in our class. Do you remember lunch time at P.S. 16? And do you recall listening to music after we came up from the cafeteria? (This memory for Marisol and I goes back over thirty years ago.) I think most of the readers/educators looking in on Edutopia can appreciate what you have to say about expressing feelings, and getting it down on paper, to "get into it, and get it out." Your recommendation is proof of how affective/effective "Contemplation Writing" was, and the fact that you can remember its influence on you years later, tells a lot about it. Thanks again, Marisol, and I will be sending you more in a separate email.

With kind regards,

Jeffrey

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Hi Gretchen,

Thanks a lot for your response to the "Music Writing" post. I have worked with this form of writing from grade two through six. I have not used it with beginning high school students, but I believe it will work on this level, especially with the music aspect, to develop intrinsic motivation, to make them come alive, or really, for them to learn how to motivate themselves by connecting with their inner lives, creative selves, and creativity. For me, if you can direct their attention to their (self) awareness, to see themselves in the mirror, to reflect, it would create the open-mindedness that will let in new perspectives, and, a new attitude. I will send you more information (lessons) in another email (with attachments) about Music Writing with the practical applications that grew out of it.

Best,

Jeffrey Pflaum

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Hi Renee,

Yes, the writing component opened up new inner/outer worlds to the kids, who had a very mature awareness (beyond their age) in the fifth and sixth grade, but needed a way to channel it so it would help them in their everyday and school lives. I did, in fact, ask students to "draw their contemplations" as an experiment, and the results were good. However, I was looking more at the writing component, to improve self-expression and self-awareness. When I experimented with second grade children, they drew some incredible illustrations to accompany their written contemplations! I remember when I first walked into my school, P.S. 16K, I opened up the closet and saw basal readers titled "Into New Worlds," and I think this was an omen for my teaching life and my students' classroom lives from 1975 until the present day. I am going to forward more information in a separate email (attachments) that your teaching staff will appreciate. Your teachers can also contact me at my gmail address (see bio/profile page) for articles, sample student contemplations, and other supporting documents that will help them implement the project. Any questions that they or you may have, I will gladly answer.

Best regards,

Jeffrey Pflaum

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Hi Renee,

Thanks very much for sharing my blog post with your staff. That is greatly appreciated. The Contemplation Writing Project has been in existence since the Seventies and ran through the Nineties with extreme positive success. After the kids completed a year's worth of contemplations (approximately 120), this "internal education" was imprinted in their minds and imaginations, and they could take it with them throughout their lives both in and out of school. Witness one of my students, Marisol, who commented on the piece and how my organic form of writing helped her. With "Music Writing," the students taught me more than I taught them; it was truly a learning experience on both ends, and it will work in your school as well. The post is only the tip of the iceberg of "Music" or "Contemplation" Writing.

With kind regards,

Jeffrey Pflaum

I want to thank Jeffrey

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I want to thank Jeffrey Pflaumm for using these creative writting techniques with my fifth grade class. I believe my class was the first class to do these creative thinking and creative writting. This was very helpful to us, this taught us to express our thoughts and inner feelings on paper. I believe for some students it is kind of difficult to express your felings verbally, so writting it down on paper made it alot easier to express everything we were feeling at that time. I know it was for me. I do recommend this technique to all those that are willing to use it.

Principal/Twin Rivers Unified School District

I will share with my staff

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I will share with my staff and colleagues.

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