Common Core in Action: Writing for an AudienceSeptember 27, 2013 | Rebecca Alber
What is new and different in the Common Core? When it comes to the writing standards, a heavy emphasis on audience for one thing, and this is very good news. The "audience" for student writing was once the lone teacher sitting after school with her cup of coffee, a red pen, and a stack of essays or other writing projects. And sadly, she might have been the only one, besides the student writers, that ever read them!
Let's take a look at the Common Core Anchor Standard in Writing that highlights audience.
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.CCRA.W.4: Produces clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
When asked, many kids, and even adults, might tell you the main difference between "school" writing and real-life writing is that the latter has an audience and the other does not. And why has it taken so long for education to catch up? That's another topic. I will stick to the topic at hand since you are the audience of this piece of writing and I want to serve your needs. (I'm guessing you are a teacher, or school leader, and like many of us in this field, working hard to get yourself acquainted with the new standards.)
Keeping It Real
Back to anchor writing standard 4. Even though writing for an audience is less expected in lower grades than it is in secondary, it's important elementary teachers set their emerging writers to task with real writing scenarios.
So let's consider then some ways to engage students in real-life writing, starting in second grade:
- Second grade: Ask the children to write about one of their favorites (person, pet, place). When they are finished, they can pair up and read it out loud to another student
- Third/fourth grade: A student crafts a letter to a family member giving reasons for and describing why this person is important to her/him
- Fifth/ sixth grade: The teacher finds a sister school in another state, assigning each student a penpal and the child writes about five things that make her/his community special (e.g. local food, customs, festivals, sights to see or monuments, etc.)
- Seventh/eighth grade: Brainstorm a list of things the students would like to change or do to improve their school. Then each student self selects a topic from the list and writes a letter of persuasion to either the principal, assistant principal, school counselor, or perhaps district superintendent
- Ninth/tenth grade: Have students select and research a local or state official. They then examine the official's campaign promises and accomplishments (or lack of) since taking office. Students can then pen a letter of congratulations to the official, or a letter calling him to action
- Eleventh/twelfth grade: Have students read aloud their college entrance essays in small groups, and then after peer editing, create an event where they read their essays to a larger audience and invite family members, school faculty, and administrators
For secondary grades, a really excellent writing task comes from NPR's essay contest, This I Believe. Watch a video a high school senior made for her "This I Believe" essay:
Ready, Aim, Focus!
The beauty of having students write for an actual audience is that it puts them in a situation of having to really think about purpose, organization, and word choice. They aren't just doing it for the sake of a grade or because "we have to." Once teachers transform traditional writing tasks into real-life ones that include audience, they will see the "have-tos" turn into a desire to get it done, make it good, and the excitement of getting a response from their reader or readers.
I used the following pre-writing tool, RAFT, with my high school students each time we began a new writing mission (and I say "we" because I wrote with them). It helped them develop a strong purpose and vision before writing:
Role: What is your primary role in this writing task? Friend? Daughter? Concerned citizen?
Audience: Who is your reader? What do you know about your reader(s) that is helpful?
Format: Which will be most effective? A letter? Essay? Speech? Poem?
Tone: How will you convey your feelings and your position? What words and phrases will you use to do this?
Remember, for struggling writers, and for English learners as well as students with special needs: graphic organizers, shortening a writing assignment, modifying it in some way, or giving a child additional writing time increases the opportunities for all learners in your class to write with success.
What are the writing for an audience tasks you assign your students? Please share with us in the comment section below.