The Deep End
Band: The Doors
Record: The Doors
Track: The End
Tiny victories win the war, right? Like Iâ€™ve said before, we need to simplify, dive deep. Hereâ€™s a little example of what I mean. Hereâ€™s a little victory. Letâ€™s say youâ€™re trying to teach endings. Youâ€™re teaching your chidlers (BFG) how to wrap it up. End it! How do you do it? First of all, endings canâ€™t be taught unlessâ€¦well, youâ€™re at the end, so itâ€™s not a first month of school lesson. Ralph Fletcherâ€™s book, Live Writing, is a great little read that gives great examples on how to truly end your story. End it emotionally, humorously, surprisingly, and circularly.
Anyhow, you teach endings by ending your story. Sure. But if we are diving deep, we find other ways to demonstrate â€śThe End.â€ť This isnâ€™t a lesson on how to teach endings. Iâ€™m not going to insult your intelligence. This is a note to share how kids make connections, how they can dive deep.
In the midst of my song writing unit, which is about the last three months of the year, this one particular girl dove deep, made the connection. To make a long story even shorter than the short versionâ€¦I break my kids up into bands; they write, perform (if they can), and record a full length CD. (More posts to come about that whole revelation) We were finishing the recording of this particular song and bingoâ€¦ â€śLetâ€™s write a circular ending,â€ť she said with delight. They did. We finished the song. And that lesson was rammed home months after it was taught and practiced over and over again. Minor victory in the grand plan of things, but a victory no less. She had that look in her eyes, that â€śtrap lookâ€ť that she wasnâ€™t going to forget it. I gave her the opportunity. She took it. She applied it. END of story.
How do you teach your kids to â€śEnd it!â€ť a little differently? Movies? Cartoons? Music?
Even better, how do you dive deep with instruction?